Have you ever looked out at the setting sun
And wondered quietly
Whether it will ever rise again?
Have you then watched
With an odd mixture of joy and melancholy
As the very next day
New light breaks
Above a glowing horizon?
Some days I curse the light
Which falls through cracks in the curtains, drawn
Which wakes me from a night of restful slumber
Or serves as confirmation
That rest has eluded me once more.
I am grateful for what I have been given
Life
Love
And the pursuit of others with whom I can share these joys
But I do not cling too tightly
To what I have
Knowing
That some day
The sun will set
At last, for good.
That is true but there is a possibility that it won’t set and we’ll be taken to a magical place along with it.
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The first paragraph is both chilling and charming!
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Thank you, Isha. It was the jumping-off point for this piece. The idea stuck in my head, and I went with it… I am glad that it had an impact on you.
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To quote a cliche: make hay while the sun shines! Make the most of the time we have. Make it a time you can proudly look back on!
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Exactly, Sadje. The fact of the matter is, our time is short. We can lament that, or we can make the best of it, And we won’t always see the beauty in life… we will fall down and not want to get up. But we need to try our best, To remember that there is beauty and joy to be found.
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So true. It’s exactly what life is all about. Do not despair. Thanks.
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Wow its so true that when we have known so much loss we know so deeply that everything is ultimately transient.
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It can sometimes feel like life just passes by, meaningless and indifferent… We are so small, and often we feel so powerless amidst the flow of time and life. But there are so many small elements of life to enjoy, and together, those small joys can make up a greater appreciation. At least that is my experience, though it isn’t always easy to maintain a hold of.
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I think finding our joy there is really the key. Its not the big things that matter and that pass but things like the sunrise the touch of someone’s had a cup of tea with a friend that really matter. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Yes I have wondered, Yes I have that odd mixed feeling, yes some days are tough, yes I appreciate what I’ve live through and done, and I’m grateful for where I am now, and knowing where I’m going later.
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Thank you very much for the honest response. I am so glad, though not surprised at all, that this resonated with you. Although, as you may have guessed, I also would respond yes, I still ask myself these questions often, just to check in. Just to remind myself…
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Lovely poem my friend.
Ya I’ve watched many sunsets and sunrises and hoped many times to see nother one of them again but my time is not done yet but when it is I’m ready to go with out a fuss.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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You always have a way of responding with such a clear, direct summation of the concepts presented, adding a healthy dose of your own personality and evoking a mix of emotions. I am so grateful for you, Dawn, and the way you interact with the world. Thank you.
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Your Welcome my friend and thank you for the lovely comment. 😀
❤️✌️
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Of course; I mean it fully. I value your presence in my life as I would a great treasure. Thank you for being who you are.
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Thank you my friend, hear I am all me unrestrand by the fasets of life that bind us in everyday life. 🌹
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And I am so glad for that, Dawn. You are an exceptional soul, and it shines through here. 🙂
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Thank you my friend ❤️.
✌️❤️
BY FOR NOW
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So grateful to you for this! I can relate! xo
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I am honored that you were ale to relate, and that you enjoyed the piece. I do hope you are able to find beauty and joy in what you have, in the life that you are living. I must say, I am grateful to know you, to have you in my life, albeit in this strange digital manner. You are certainly on of those I count in the number I am able to share the joys of life with.
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Thank you so much that means so much to me 😙😍
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No thank you is needed, my friend. 🙂 I am just glad to know you.
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