On the horizon
Where earth and ocean meet the sky
Where two worlds collide
This is where my heart resides
Always at the divide
If you pay attention
You can see it in my eyes.
The sun and the moon
Indifferent in their ways
Are unaware this place
Ignorant their position
As they drift aimlessly through space
Never knowing their power
Not understanding
The part that they play
In deciding our fate
In dictating the difference
Between the nights and the day.
Oh, but in the soft twilight
There is no day, there is no night
And in this balance
But for a moment
All is right.
Such a wonderful post, My Friend!!! Love everything about twilight and sundowns. Bravo!!
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Thank you very much, Charles! I am so glad that you enjoyed the piece.
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I did! It was wonderful and inspirational for me! I will have to share what I wrote from being inspired by your piece!!! Send me an email at – chucklindholm@hotmail.com and I can share it with you if you want. Bravo!!!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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My sincere gratitude for this generous reblog! Thank you, my good friend!
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You are so welcome!!! Your words whispered to be that they wanted to meet my followers and I said, “Sure” Ha! Happy to share this great poem!!! Bravo!!
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Lovely poem my friend, I could see the place in my mind’s eye, a beautiful place we’re all is suren.
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BY FOR NOW
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Oh, this is such a lovely response, Dawn. Thank you. I am so honored that the vision carries with the words…
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Your Welcome my friend.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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Oh my, my, my! This poem has everything – wisdom, beauty, meaning, feeling, love, life… And the title! You’ve outdone yourself my friend. I’m so entranced, I don’t even know what to say!
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Your comment has left me glowing, Isha… 🙂 What you have said is more than enough. Thank you.
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Thanks to you! This was a treat.
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soft twilight drew me in and your words was like gentle rainfall, i am visiting it again, simple beautiful
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The twilight always draws me in… Although I have at times lamented the ephemeral nature of this magical time, I also recognize that there is a certain beauty in that alone. The same as with gentle rain, were it to always fall, we might grow tired of it and seek to escape it. When such things are appreciated in moderation, they are that much more enjoyable, as I have found with almost such experiences… 🙂
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that is the most lovely and magical description of twilight, thank you for sharing your thoughts. twilight in Asia is known as a bewitching time, time of day between light and darkness when spirits are allowed to roam free, it’s always been a favourite hour of mine.
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So so so wonderful. I relate to this so much. Just lovely.
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Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it, and that you found it relatable. That is perhaps one of my favorite aspects of sharing writing here – learning all of the ways in which our worlds overlap (though I likewise enjoy learning of all the perspectives and aspects of life that I do not hold in common). It is such a beautiful, diverse world in which we live…
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It truly is.. sometimes the beauty astounds me. It truly is heaven here and your words touch that place so so often. Hugs ❤
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Reblogged this on Emerging From The Dark Night and commented:
Such a talented poet 🙂
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Oh, you are far too kind… Thank you so much for the share and the uplifting words.
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I think this Post is Beautiful. 🙂❤
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Oh, thank you Adnama. You are such a wonderful presence in this place. 🙂
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Thank you, Who is the lucky lady who has your heart?
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You are quite welcome.
Blackbird, or Amethyst alternatively, is the one to whom my heart is tied. There are several poems here which we have co-written, should you wish you check the archives. 🙂
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🙂
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Wonderful imagination 👏👏
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Thank you, Srikanth! 🙂
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Love this, twilight is my favorite time of day 🖤
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It is a powerful time of day… It is hard to explain the feeling that accompanies standing quietly in those hours of the day and watching the light slowly fade.
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Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
L. Stevens’s choice for this week’s Pay It Forward Thursday.
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Thank you so much for this. I am honored and a bit at a loss of words. This has made my day.
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Timeless, magical, and simply beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Thank you again for the recognition on this! I really appreciate it. I am truly honored to be included with such talented writers on such a respected blog.
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