When they try
To define for you
The landscape in which you belong
And the borders thereof
Respond
Not with words
Rather
With wings
Objects, and the Distance Between Them
Dreams, thoughts, and experiences expressed through poetry and prose
When they try
To define for you
The landscape in which you belong
And the borders thereof
Respond
Not with words
Rather
With wings
Lovely poem my friend.
We can not be contaned by borders we must be allowed to fly freely to reach are gols.
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BY FOR NOW
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Thank you, Dawn. There are many who will try. We simply must rise above their efforts. π
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Your Welcome my friend, yes I know and we can. β€οΈβοΈ
BY FOR NOW
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You have this knack of conveying a beautiful message using a few lines. It’s brilliant. I enjoy reading your poetry. Even your longer works.
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Thank you, Nitin; your words are so kind and bring me much joy. It means a lot to me to hear that those who read are able to receive and appreciate the message. I am grateful that you read and enjoy my writing, and that you take the time to comment when you feel inspired to do so.
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You’re very welcome.
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This is lovely
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Thank you, Adi. I always appreciate your readership and commentary.
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I’m your biggest fan π€
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I am so grateful for you.
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Oh, lovely!
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Thank you, Punam. π
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You are welcome.π
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Oh WOW, i LOVE this. Great last line. Tis the truth
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π Your comment and the energy in it has made me smile. Thank you for that. I am glad that you found meaning in that line; we often forget the power we have to overcome when we empower ourselves. The physical world does have hard limitations to what we can and cannot do, but there are no such limitations to our will. π
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This is beautiful !!
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Thank you, Srikanth! π
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Wow this is just perfect π
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Thank you! π
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I like this. Where I belong may not be set in stone, for
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Me it is about the Journey I am on and Not Necessrily the Destination.
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That is an excellent perspective, thank you for sharing it and relating it to this piece. It always brings me such happiness to see all of the different perspectives and interpretations that people have when they read, not just what I write but any piece of writing, from song lyrics to poetry to novels. We all give a bit of ourselves and take away equally. It is what helps keep the dialogue of the written world alive. π
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You are Welcome Auroraboros.
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