Half-moon, cool night, still
Summer month feigns autumn
Breeze betrays the calm
Breeze Betrays the Calm
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Objects, and the Distance Between Them
Dreams, thoughts, & experiences
Objects, and the Distance Between Them
Dreams, thoughts, & experiences
Half-moon, cool night, still
Summer month feigns autumn
Breeze betrays the calm
Objects, and the Distance Between Them 
Lovely words
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I thought it was just a title post and I loved it. Haha never knew it was a prelude
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That is okay. I have actually thought about doing that, though this was just a pilot, I suppose.
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And it was a hit 😊
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Nice depiction with beautiful words
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Thank you, Ria! I appreciate the read and comment.
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You’re welcome!
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Breeze betrays the calm. Personification.
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I love this one. Short and full of meaning.
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I am so glad that you enjoyed it. I have neglected the beauty in short writing lately. There is a very unique value that comes from the need for careful word choice and delicate precision.
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I agree with you. I mostly write fairly short pieces. I like to try and get lots of meaning into a small package lol. I must read some more of your stuff later. I like the idea of stream of consciousness writing. Don’t think I have ever done it, might try it, thanks for the idea.
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I really like that. I have written several shorter pieces but often, with the stream of consciousness approach, I find I continue on with more ideas and before long I have a full length piece (and am quite happy with it). It would be interesting to work on something together at some point. Let’s keep that in mind perhaps.
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Ok. Yes, let’s. Maybe I will try a stream of consciousness piece and see how it works
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Lovely. I love these short poems.
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Thank you, Lawrence. I need to write more of them I realize it is likely a bit overwhelming to have so many relatively lengthy pieces… It might be more accessible to mix in a shorter piece from time to time.
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Looking forward to reading them!
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Lovely poem my friend. ❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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Thank you, Dawn.
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And the prelude is even prettier
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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This is a beautiful haiku ❤
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Thank you! 🙂
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Beautifully penned verse!!!!
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Thank you, Charles. I appreciate the comment.
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You are so welcome. It was a delight to read!
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Short and sweet 👏👍
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Exactly. I like to write longer posts usually, because I have so much to say, but it is nice sometimes to try to condense what I am trying to say; it is a healthy challenge.
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Of course it is ! So much in so little words is a talent 👍
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