Breathe deep as
Fresh morning air fills grateful lungs
Spring rains on parched desert plains
My mind still fond to trace
Memories of hot breath on your soft sleeping neck
Fingers move through
Sharpened spines
To smooth cactus skin beneath
Tracing
The space between
For once I felt
Your hands to flow
Amongst settled careless hairs
As I lay beside your resting thigh
Soon to be followed
By hours spent
Trading mortal moments
Beneath luminous strings of beaded threads
Arms in knowing embrace
The smallest and most precise of circles felt
The small of my back
The curve of my spine
Taking it back
All back
Way back
To hours spent in bed with foreign bodies:
Not yours
Shapeless sand replaced by
Beds of olive green
Not sleeping
But rested just the same
words drip off heavenly presence in this one !
how beautifully you’ve woven the emotions into words !
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Such a lovely and uplifting comment; I am so grateful… Thank you.
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It was a pleasure reading it !
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Thank you, thefirstdark! 🙂
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I like your choice of words 😍
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Why, thank you. 🙂
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Gorgeous!
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Thank you so much for the comment and for reading my post.
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This has great flow and imagery. I can feel a sense of finding true love when least expected in this. Fine writing.
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Thank you, Chris. The versatility of emotion and relationships really shines in those unexpected moments… 🙂
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The imagery is truly alive in this piece. Had to read it twice. Great Work!
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I love how bridge the gaps between telling and showing – it’s like you take our hand to trace the outline of emotion.
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Thank you so much, Maggie. I try to vary perspective; doing so is much more akin to the truth of the subject in my experience.
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Thank you for sharing! I really appreciate it.
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My pleasure!
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I love how well this flows. You’ve used the senses beautifully – really enjoyed this x
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Thank you so much for this. I am so grateful for your comments, and that you took the time to read and digest my writing.
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Keep writing more! Looking forward to reading your work again xx
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That ending got me!! What a beautiful piece throughout!! Fantastic!
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Thank you! I am always glad when you stop by, depart with some of my thoughts, and leave a few of your own 🙂
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It’s my pleasure, really!! 😊
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Beautiful poem! Thank you for following ThusNSuch.
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
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