Into new water
Deep and wide
Can’t see bottom
Above, no skies
Float for a while
Won’t sink, won’t rise
Tread, wait to “see”
All ears;
No use for eyes
Drift, silent
On the waves
No light
Neither darkness
No hours, no days
Think only of you
Uncertain
Count the ways
You live inside
My head
In a haze
A daze
A thousand wasted moments
A thousand ways
To say
Your name
To see
Your face
Dream big or go
Home
Is so far
Distant ever still
Drifting
Just like me
Just like you
Up until
Time to go
Time to stay
And stay I will
Into new water
No going back
Into the shadows:
Fade to black…
But not like that.
Fight, attack
Return to being
Return to
Track
Observe
Not silent, reserved
Not violent, unnerved
Assured
Rise above, tethered
A thousand birds
A thousand lines
A thousand times
A thousand voices
A thousand, mine
A thousand minds
A thousand questions
A single reason
A single drive
A single answer
A single sign
Into new water
Into new sky
Into new earth
Into new fire
What’s come is gone
What’s here is now
Looking forward
Looking out
Thinking clearly
Think out loud
Moving forward
Moving out
Objects, and the Distance Between Them 
beautiful ❤
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Thank you!
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That’s actually very good.
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Why, thank you. 🙂
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This was a different form of poem. Great one👌
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Yes, this was new style for me and a new method as well. I am exploring a bit in my writing, appropriate for the new directions I am seeking in my life. 🙂
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That’s great. One should keep trying out new things. I like the unpredictability. 👍
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Great structure and style.
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Thank you, Chris. I appreciate the comment and that you took the time to read.
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You’re welcome. I like your style.
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Into new style of writing which is so different but good. May what you seek, finds you.
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I am very appreciative of this feedback. I honestly didn’t realize how different this writing was until I had posted it and everyone began commenting on how much it varied from my prior writing… I tend to just write and analyze afterwards, so this was just what came out. I am glad that you enjoy it.
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Nice my friend.
BY FOR NOW
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Thanks Dawn. How have you been? You’ve been quiet lately.
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I’m alright for the post part, thanks for asking. 😘 💗 ✌
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Of course. I always hope the best for you… You bring such a positive energy to this community. We love to have you here, and definitely notice your absence.
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